Feedback from Group 3

We like the layout, all the information is arranged into short sections which makes it easy to find the information you’re looking for. Additionally, the writing is clear, concise and well sourced.

We also like the good use of pictures to break up the text, although we think some of the images would benefit from a caption to explain what they show.

We’d like to see the individual pages ‘tied together’ more, at the moment they all seem to stand on their own but we’d like to see the links between the different subtopics – e.g. you could link from the tumour symptoms (where you talk about mood etc.) to the corresponding brain anatomy that is affected. This would make it easier to refer back to information the reader has already read as well.